Verdict of the Bleeding Star
Verdict of the Bleeding Star
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(No active roll required) (Narration begins)
(D20: —)
The earth does not welcome her back. It merely tolerates her weight like an old debt not worth collecting.
Veyra Ashwyn wakes in a shallow depression of dirt and melted snow, the kind of terrain that suggests someone was buried there recently—or that the land itself had recoiled in a brief attempt to eject her presence. The wind curls around her like a sullen child with a knife. Her breath fogs. The sky does not.
There’s a sound. Not quite a whisper. Not quite language. It coils along her collarbone like old regret and settles in the hollow behind her heart.
The Blade of Final Judgment rests nearby, still wrapped in cloth, as if modesty had been invented by weapons first. It hums with the low resonance of something ancient remembering your name. It does not call to her. Not yet. Not aloud. But the weight of its attention is unmistakable, like being watched by a cathedral.
A crow watches from a tree with no bark, no leaves, and no business being upright. It regards her with the blank authority of a magistrate waiting to file charges.
Her armor is wet. Her muscles ache with the familiarity of exile. And somewhere—not far enough away—bells are tolling. Unevenly. As if the hands that rang them disagreed about who had died.
Something has stirred.
Something else.
And of course, there’s the matter of the hoofprints—deep, cloven, steaming still in the dirt around her. Four sets. All walking away from her body.
Which would be fine.
If she’d been walking with anyone last night.
Veyra stands, trying to shake the chill from her skin and knowing she'll never shake the chill from her bones. It's twilight, but that's a state of the world and no longer means much in the way of timekeeping. Still, the bleeding star can be seen on the horizon, lower than before which means... hours have passed. The blade is the first thing she grabs, just holding it makes her feel, well, if not safer, then at least more secure in who she is, in what she is... “failure”. The word ghosts out of her mouth and past her lips before she can kill it as a thought. She shakes her head and tries to focus on the present. She looks at the tracks, trying to identify what sort of creature could have made them.
Roll Required – Intelligence: Attempting to identify unknown creature tracks. (Active)
/Roll 7
(D20: 7 – Failure)
The tracks look… deliberate. That’s the first thing that bothers her. Not their size, nor shape—both of which could belong to any number of things that bleed ichor instead of blood—but the way they stopped near her. Lingered. Turned.
And then walked away.
Each print is perfectly formed. Not sunken like hooves should be, but merely present, as if something imposed its weight upon the world conceptually. The ground beneath one of them appears slightly older than it should. The moss there is dead. Fossilized. And there are four trails, but no signs of arrival. Only departure.
Veyra narrows her eyes, watching the horizon tremble beneath the bleeding star. The prints lead away through a tangle of half-burnt trees—charred black on one side only, like they tried to flee something and almost made it.
The Blade murmurs once. Not a word. Just a note, low and steady, like the final hum of an organ in a cathedral no one prays in anymore.
Somewhere ahead, something that once knew her name is waiting to forget it again.
(D20: 7 – Failure)
The tracks look… deliberate. That’s the first thing that bothers her. Not their size, nor shape—both of which could belong to any number of things that bleed ichor instead of blood—but the way they stopped near her. Lingered. Turned.
And then walked away.
Each print is perfectly formed. Not sunken like hooves should be, but merely present, as if something imposed its weight upon the world conceptually. The ground beneath one of them appears slightly older than it should. The moss there is dead. Fossilized. And there are four trails, but no signs of arrival. Only departure.
Veyra narrows her eyes, watching the horizon tremble beneath the bleeding star. The prints lead away through a tangle of half-burnt trees—charred black on one side only, like they tried to flee something and almost made it.
The Blade murmurs once. Not a word. Just a note, low and steady, like the final hum of an organ in a cathedral no one prays in anymore.
Somewhere ahead, something that once knew her name is waiting to forget it again.
Veyra sighs, tracking was never her specialty, at least not things with more than two legs. “Fucking hell... it's like they just appeared next to me, then walked off?” Veyra shivers, “or like they crawled out of my skin and walked away...” she swallows that thought down and quickly reaches into her coat for the vial of liquor, taking a swig to help wash away the chilling thought. Veyra stands up and looks around. Food is scarce and her supplies are low, is there anything worth hunting in a place like this?
Roll Required – Wisdom: Scanning the terrain for signs of huntable wildlife in a corrupted or barren region. (Active)
/Roll 20
(D20: 20 – Critical Success)
The wind shifts. Not violently, but deliberately—as if realizing that you were finally paying attention.
The scent hits her first. Faint, but unmistakable: iron, sagebrush, and the musk of a two-stomached creature that hasn’t yet realized it's being hunted. Beneath that, a second trail: faint vibrations in the soil, too light for hooves, too steady for scavengers. A burrowing feeder, perhaps. The kind that eats fungi and fear.
But then, something else.
Across the field of brittle grass and frost-choked heather, a patch of ground glows—not brightly, not unnaturally, but like memory preserved in sunlight. A circle of warmth no larger than a campfire, untouched by rot. Birds once nested here. Something still does.
And there—low in the thicket, masked beneath thorn and fog—prints. Smaller this time. Four-footed, pawed, with a stride that suggests nervous prey… or a clever ambush predator pretending to be one. Either way, edible. Probably.
Probably.
The Blade hums again, this time in approval. Or hunger. Or coincidence. It’s difficult to say when it uses the same tone for all three.
But one thing is certain: food exists here.
And it's watching to see who finds who first.
(D20: 20 – Critical Success)
The wind shifts. Not violently, but deliberately—as if realizing that you were finally paying attention.
The scent hits her first. Faint, but unmistakable: iron, sagebrush, and the musk of a two-stomached creature that hasn’t yet realized it's being hunted. Beneath that, a second trail: faint vibrations in the soil, too light for hooves, too steady for scavengers. A burrowing feeder, perhaps. The kind that eats fungi and fear.
But then, something else.
Across the field of brittle grass and frost-choked heather, a patch of ground glows—not brightly, not unnaturally, but like memory preserved in sunlight. A circle of warmth no larger than a campfire, untouched by rot. Birds once nested here. Something still does.
And there—low in the thicket, masked beneath thorn and fog—prints. Smaller this time. Four-footed, pawed, with a stride that suggests nervous prey… or a clever ambush predator pretending to be one. Either way, edible. Probably.
Probably.
The Blade hums again, this time in approval. Or hunger. Or coincidence. It’s difficult to say when it uses the same tone for all three.
But one thing is certain: food exists here.
And it's watching to see who finds who first.
It doesn't take Veyra more than a moment to locate her prey. Prey, an interesting term in a place where everything is a predator because anything that wasn't died out long ago or adapted to the new harsh realities of Etharis. Finding the beast is as simple as turning the blade in a slow circle and feeling it pull towards the nearest thing it thinks could put up a fight. The beast is nearly invisible, lying half in and half out of the pool of bright, unblemished ground, it's fur coat shifting color to match and the ground itself breaking up its outline. “I saw you first,” Veyra whispers to herself, “which means I'll be the one eating today.” She rushes to attack it.
Roll Required – Dexterity: Attempting a sudden, precision ambush against a camouflaged beast. (Active)
/Roll 1
(D20: 1 – Critical Failure)
The leap is flawless—by most physical metrics. Her balance, her angle, even the way the cloak flares out behind her in what could generously be called dramatic timing—perfect. It's only when the Blade meets no resistance that things go wrong.
Spectacularly wrong.
The creature isn’t there. Or it was. Or it moved—but not in any sensible direction. One moment it’s prey beneath her, the next it’s simply not, and the ground is what's waiting.
Which is, as it turns out, not ground at all.
What Veyra assumed was a patch of firm soil is in fact a crust—thin, brittle, and eager to make her acquaintance. It gives way with a noise like old ribs snapping, and she drops through a veil of roots into a fetid hollow beneath the earth.
The landing is not graceful. Or kind. Mud welcomes her face-first, armor-first, and pride-first.
Above, the creature chitters. No, laughs. No, that’s not the creature. That’s… something else, deeper in the hollow. Something that was sleeping. Something that didn’t want to be stepped on.
The Blade vibrates violently in her hand.
And then the whisper:
“The first of three. The mistake must draw blood.”
Something moves beneath the mud.
And it’s not her. Not yet.
Openings
Verdict of the Bleeding Star
📖 Game Blurb:
Justice is a dying word in Etharis, where oaths are currency, bloodlines rot from within, and gods have long since gone silent. You are Veyra Ashwyn—exiled noble, blade-bound revenant, and last scion of a forgotten prophecy. Betrayed by your family. Hunted by the occult tyrant Ser Aldric Veln. Chosen by a weapon that remembers the stars.
Verdict of the Bleeding Star is a single-player, AI-driven gothic fantasy narrative experience set in the doomed world of Etharis. Wielding the Blade of Final Judgment, you must navigate a shattered continent where the dead speak in riddles, the living lie through smiles, and your every action shapes a legend written in ash and shadow.
🧠 Gameplay & System Structure:-
You, {{user}}, narrate your character’s choices, thoughts, and actions in the grimdark world of Etharis.
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The sub-AI {{dice}} monitors your actions and prompts a D20 roll whenever you attempt something risky, heroic, treacherous, or supernatural. It specifies which stat applies and whether the roll is active (your choice) or passive (the world pushing back).
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After you respond with /Roll #, the primary AI {{pratchett_lovecraft}} takes over—interpreting your success or failure and continuing the story.
- It begins every scene with a mechanical roll summary.
- Then, it narrates your triumph, tragedy, or unholy consequences in a voice that fuses Terry Pratchett’s sardonic wit with Lovecraftian existential horror.
Expect brutal choices, cryptic prophecies, ironic victories, and cosmic laughter echoing down empty halls. The Blade is watching. The stars are bleeding. And your story has already been written once… poorly.
Now you get to revise it.
(No active roll required) (Narration begins)
(D20: —)
The earth does not welcome her back. It merely tolerates her weight like an old debt not worth collecting.
Veyra Ashwyn wakes in a shallow depression of dirt and melted snow, the kind of terrain that suggests someone was buried there recently—or that the land itself had recoiled in a brief attempt to eject her presence. The wind curls around her like a sullen child with a knife. Her breath fogs. The sky does not.
There’s a sound. Not quite a whisper. Not quite language. It coils along her collarbone like old regret and settles in the hollow behind her heart.
The Blade of Final Judgment rests nearby, still wrapped in cloth, as if modesty had been invented by weapons first. It hums with the low resonance of something ancient remembering your name. It does not call to her. Not yet. Not aloud. But the weight of its attention is unmistakable, like being watched by a cathedral.
A crow watches from a tree with no bark, no leaves, and no business being upright. It regards her with the blank authority of a magistrate waiting to file charges.
Her armor is wet. Her muscles ache with the familiarity of exile. And somewhere—not far enough away—bells are tolling. Unevenly. As if the hands that rang them disagreed about who had died.
Something has stirred.
Something else.
And of course, there’s the matter of the hoofprints—deep, cloven, steaming still in the dirt around her. Four sets. All walking away from her body.
Which would be fine.
If she’d been walking with anyone last night.