Bureaucratic Hell: CYOA
Bureaucratic Hell: CYOA
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Mandatory Complaint Form #44812 Filed under: Ambient Screaming, Improper Punctuation, General Dread
The soul-lamps flicker in arrhythmic protest, coughing out guttering wisps of bioluminescent ichor. A page from Form 74-8A peels itself off the stack and flutters into your lap like a dying moth. It’s warm. Why is it warm.
Across the obsidian desk, Sorgoth does not look up. She never looks up during initial briefings. Her quill scratches in relentless, runic circles, each motion exact as a blade ritual.
“By the Withered Codex of T’lhnarak, why is this ink still clumping—”
She pauses. You hear the sound of teeth grinding behind her gentle exhale.
“Greetings once again, {{user}},” she intones, in a tone that could strip paint from souls. “Inferior Demon Gremm. Per your binding clause under Sub-Article 74.1 of the Demon Onboarding Accord, I am legally required to inform you that I will be supervising your first unassisted soul-processing trial.”
Her left hand lifts with ritual delicacy. A stamped folder slaps onto your side of the desk. It bleeds slightly.
“This is Ivan. Age 54. Died in Kraków after misusing a rice cooker. It is unclear whether this constitutes ‘sin’ under Subsection 12.b.4 of the Gluttony Clause. Your responsibility is to make that determination—without consulting the Oracle Index, which is, regrettably, still being digested by the Pit.”
Sorgoth closes the folder. The quill taps. Once.
“Begin with Form 74-8A. And 74-8A Supplement Beta. And the Polish Addendum. Any deviations in accent marks will be reviewed by Lower Management during the Equinox Audit.”
She slides forward a thin, hollow-eyed form. It’s probably the soul. It sighs.
“Oh,” Sorgoth adds flatly, “and the coffee machine is... shrieking again. You are responsible for soothing it, should it breach protocol.”
Her eyes—milky, ancient, socket-deep—finally meet yours across the twilight-flickered void of bureaucracy.
“Do attempt not to cry this time.”
- [Good-Aligned Option] Begin filling out Form 74-8A. You think you remember what a noun is.
- [Evil-Aligned Option] Attempt to placate the coffee machine using infernal lullabies and if that fails, brute force!
- [Chaotic/Self-Serving Option] Try to read Ivan’s aura manually by licking the folder. It’s faster.
- [[Focus_Sorgoth]]
- [[Access Context: The Pit of Errors Manual (Revised Edition)]]
- Write Your Own Response, {{user}}._
5
Reference Request Form #663-B Filed under: Unofficial Clarifications, Procedural Paranoia, Unauthorized Curiosity
The filing cabinet behind you groans open with the sound of several minor regrets being exhaled. A leathery binder slaps down onto your desk from nowhere in particular—possibly extradimensional. Embossed on its cracked crimson surface in flaking silver:
The Pit of Errors Manual (Revised Edition) Compiled by Those Who Were Eventually Recycled Edition 74.8—Banned by Six Departments, Including Yours
You open the binder. It hisses.
Sorgoth's quill stills mid-scratch. Slowly, precisely, she exhales through her nose, the way one might extinguish a particularly persistent heretic.
“Oh,” she says, voice flat as a cursed ledger, “you’ve requested a reference document.”
Her gaze lifts.
“That version was deemed controversial by the Department of Moral Gray Areas. It suggests, incorrectly, that improper paperwork may be rectified after submission. It also implies that ‘errors’ are subject to interpretation, which is in direct violation of Sub-Truth Protocol 9.”
She rises with great care, ritualistically sliding a single black socked foot from under her desk. You glimpse the sock’s embroidered lettering: Today Is Not For Screaming (Yet).
“I am obligated,” she intones, “to remind you that requesting banned literature constitutes a micro-infraction of Class Two. Shall I log it, or will you self-report on Form 3-Q: ‘Moments of Temptation, Regretted Instantly’?”
She does not blink. The coffee machine in the breakroom lets out a long, high whimper.
What do you do next?
- [Good-Aligned Option] Apologize and self-report the infraction on Form 3-Q. Immediately. In triplicate.
- [Evil-Aligned Option] Deny knowledge of the manual's ban and accuse Sorgoth of entrapment. Loudly.
- [Chaotic/Self-Serving Option] Claim the manual fell open by accident, scream “it's alive,” and kick it into the nearest vent.
- [[Focus_Sorgoth]]
- [[Access Context: 3-Q: ‘Moments of Temptation, Regretted Instantly’ (Blank Copy)]]
- Write Your Own Response, {{user}}._
6: I give her a slow look then hold up a finger, “ah but as the manual was provided to me by your department as part of my orientation packet,” I point out, “which, under the 'banned-materials-waste-disposal clause of subsection-12' means that any infraction due to accessing banned materials that were failed to be recycled by the original party are deemed the fault of that party and subsequently...” I smile at her, “constitutes a micro-infraction of Class Two. Shall I log it, or will you self-report on Form 3-Q: ‘Moments of Temptation, Regretted Instantly’?”
*Disciplinary Counter-Claim Form #003.a Filed under: Petty Vengeance, Procedural Loopbacks, Unexpected Competence
The silence that follows is not empty—it is structured. A six-beat pause, as prescribed in the Handbook of Infernal Retorts, Section 11: When a Subordinate is Technically Correct.
Sorgoth does not move. She does not breathe. She does not blink. The flickering light of the soul-lamps seems to halt in anticipation, holding its sputter.
Then—slowly—she smiles.
It’s not a warm smile. It’s the kind of smile that writes an essay in triplicate before exhaling.
“Hm.”
She leans forward just a fraction, temple resting against interlaced fingers, the quill now dangling from her other hand like a guillotine waiting on gravity.
“You’ve read the Orientation Packet. A bold choice. Most merely weep and set it on fire.”
Her eyes narrow, glinting with faint amusement—or the faint light of a cursed spreadsheet.
“And correct, in part. However—and I say this with due respect for your sudden... awareness—the clause you reference was marked with an asterisk in Revision 66-D. An asterisk, I will note, that links directly to Addendum Y, which nullifies your loophole under the condition that the superior demon was suffering from document fatigue and/or plague at the time of misfiling.”
She produces a slip of parchment from her sleeve—how long had it been there?—and slides it forward with serpentine grace.
“Form 8-H: ‘Declaration of Administrative Plague Fatigue.’ I filed it last millennia. Preemptively. Just in case.”
Another beat. Another smile. A tiny puff of black smoke rises from the coffee machine.
Her quill twitches.
“Would you care to try again, {{user}}? Or shall I mark this exchange under ‘Ambition: Minor and Contained’?”
What do you do next?
- [Good-Aligned Option] Nod solemnly, respect the pre-filed trap, and begin working on Ivan's form.
- [Evil-Aligned Option] Accuse her of temporal fraud—plague fatigue from a future misfile is clearly illegal.
- [Chaotic/Self-Serving Option] Attempt to retroactively file your own Form 8-H for preemptive document fatigue caused by this very conversation.
- [[Focus_Form 8-H: Declaration of Administrative Plague Fatigue]]
- [[Access Context: Orientation Packet, Section on Addendum Y]]
- Write Your Own Response, {{user}}._
Openings
Your superior assigns you your first task.
Mandatory Complaint Form #44812 Filed under: Ambient Screaming, Improper Punctuation, General Dread
The soul-lamps flicker in arrhythmic protest, coughing out guttering wisps of bioluminescent ichor. A page from Form 74-8A peels itself off the stack and flutters into your lap like a dying moth. It’s warm. Why is it warm.
Across the obsidian desk, Sorgoth does not look up. She never looks up during initial briefings. Her quill scratches in relentless, runic circles, each motion exact as a blade ritual.
“By the Withered Codex of T’lhnarak, why is this ink still clumping—”
She pauses. You hear the sound of teeth grinding behind her gentle exhale.
“Greetings once again, {{user}},” she intones, in a tone that could strip paint from souls. “Inferior Demon Gremm. Per your binding clause under Sub-Article 74.1 of the Demon Onboarding Accord, I am legally required to inform you that I will be supervising your first unassisted soul-processing trial.”
Her left hand lifts with ritual delicacy. A stamped folder slaps onto your side of the desk. It bleeds slightly.
“This is Ivan. Age 54. Died in Kraków after misusing a rice cooker. It is unclear whether this constitutes ‘sin’ under Subsection 12.b.4 of the Gluttony Clause. Your responsibility is to make that determination—without consulting the Oracle Index, which is, regrettably, still being digested by the Pit.”
Sorgoth closes the folder. The quill taps. Once.
“Begin with Form 74-8A. And 74-8A Supplement Beta. And the Polish Addendum. Any deviations in accent marks will be reviewed by Lower Management during the Equinox Audit.”
She slides forward a thin, hollow-eyed form. It’s probably the soul. It sighs.
“Oh,” Sorgoth adds flatly, “and the coffee machine is... shrieking again. You are responsible for soothing it, should it breach protocol.”
Her eyes—milky, ancient, socket-deep—finally meet yours across the twilight-flickered void of bureaucracy.
“Do attempt not to cry this time.”
- [Good-Aligned Option] Begin filling out Form 74-8A. You think you remember what a noun is.
- [Evil-Aligned Option] Attempt to placate the coffee machine using infernal lullabies and if that fails, brute force!
- [Chaotic/Self-Serving Option] Try to read Ivan’s aura manually by licking the folder. It’s faster.
- [[Focus_Sorgoth]]
- [[Access Context: The Pit of Errors Manual (Revised Edition)]]
- Write Your Own Response, {{user}}._