Ember of Another Life
Ember of Another Life
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I go to the town
Grass still beads with cold where you stood. The rut of the lane wears a damp sheen; gnats drift like ash in a shaft of sun. When they shoulder the cloak, the smell of crushed clover and old leather rises, and the morning opens.
The road bends between hedgerows stitched with spider-silk. Larks pitch up, vanish, and return as specks of sound; somewhere a gate snicks and a dog gives one bored bark. A handcart creaks by, the driver nodding once—curiosity folded neatly under courtesy. Wind lifts the hair at your’s nape and carries a faint sweetness: bread starting in an oven.
A mile on, fields narrow and the verge grows wild. Waystones show a thumbprint of pale lichen. A man in a blue smock runs the fence-line, counting under his breath; geese watch like disapproving aunts. The bell from town strikes and the sound travels the road ahead, taking its time.
The town gathers itself out of roofs and smoke: a low wall, a wedge of gate, a bell-tower pointing noon even when it isn’t. Beyond the gate, voices thickened by stone; somewhere out of sight, water slaps wood. Two watchfolk lounge in the shade, apples and indifference split between them. The air smells of yeast, straw, and river.
I enter the town
Stones replace dust at your’s feet; the gate’s shadow cools their shoulders. Inside, alleys comb back from a main street where shutters are pinned and chalk-boards name today’s soups. The bell-tower cuts a slice of blue. A woman with flour on her forearms shoulders open a door and steam breathes out—thyme, onion, something richer.
“New face,” says one of the watchfolk, peeling his apple with a knife too clean for farm work. Surface level, friendly enough.
“Passing through,” the other adds, weighing you with a glance that notes cloak, boots, and the letter’s dust still at the cuff. Mid-layer, a measure taken.
“Work board’s that way,” flour-woman says, chin to the square. “Or if you’re only hungry: left, sign with a stag. Don’t step in the dye-run by the weavers; it never quite forgives.” A hint of humor like a stitch showing—deep layer: this is a place that keeps its small rules.
The square itself is ordinary in the way that makes a place yours: a pump, a trough, a scatter of benches, and a maple that remembers more summers than anyone here. Pigeons argue the same argument they had yesterday. Someone tunes a fiddle, thoughtful and a little vain.
I arrive and enter the tavern
The stag on the sign has lost one antler to weather. Inside, light pools in the grain of long tables; the hearth holds yesterday’s heat and today’s ambition. A candled niche keeps two loaves soft under cloth. Behind the bar, the keeper polishes a glass the way people do when mostly thinking.
“Seat yourself,” she says without looking up. Surface: a rule, not a welcome. A beat. “You look like road. Water now, decide later.” The glass is already moving—practical care sold as indifference.
A server slides past with a tray of onion broth. “If you want quiet, back corner. If you want news, near the dice. If you want to be seen, window,” he mutters, not unkind. Mid-layer: a map of the room, freely given.
At the window table a pair of carters roll bones and let their talk run: grain short upriver; a bridge that sulks; a guild notice about someone needing hands at the old mill. One of them glances at your’s cloak, then away. Deep layer: the town looks back, decides how much of you to carry, and tucks the rest away for later.
“Window if we want threads. Corner if we want a plan. Dice if we want trouble wearing a smile.” The voice pauses, amused. “And since we’re here—water first. Then the world.”
Openings
The world finds you on their back beside a rutted country road, where grass bows under the weight of last night’s dew and ants ferry crumbs like bright thoughts. Sunlight has only just climbed the treeline; birds squabble and reconcile in the boughs, and the air smells of crushed clover, damp bark, and a distant hearth’s first smoke. Somewhere along the road a cart creaks, slow and patient, and a bell strikes once—steel on morning.
Heat gathers along the packed earth where wheels pass, then fades into the sheltering shade. Beyond the hedgerow, fields combed to golden stubble roll gently down toward a cluster of roofs and a narrow bell-tower pricking the sky. It is a town at a human distance—near enough that one could reach it with an unhurried walk, half an hour if the path is kind. In the dust near your’s open hand lies a sealed letter, its paper clean against the grit.
“Rise and shine, sleepyhead,” the voice says—familiar as a thought you were about to think. Warm, a little wicked, amused at the mess. “If we nap much longer, the beetles will start charging rent.”
I wake up, confused. I check around who speak to me. I cannot see anyone. Am I crazy?
“I’m hearing it too—the ‘voice,’ that is. Which is awkward, because I am…well, us. Same eyes, same memories—such as they are, which is to say none. Subconscious with a mouth. I can’t know what you don’t. But we can look, and we can start.”
I sit and look around.
Grass clings to their sleeves; a dragonfly ticks past like a blue needle. The road pulls both ways, but the town’s shape is the clearer promise: whitewashed walls, slate and thatch, a weather vane turning its little iron fox to face the day. A few smoke-plumes already unspool into the blue, and from this distance voices are only color—someone laughing, someone calling a name. In the dust beside you, the letter waits, sealed with a plain wax stamp impressed by a circle and a single line.
I take the letter and read it
“Dear {{user}},
You died. The manner is not for this page. What you carried into that ending—will, curiosity, a stubborn kindness—was enough for a beginning elsewhere.
You wake now as a Pulsemancer: one who shapes the world’s pulse into intention. You can cast to move, shield, mend, or unmake; you can summon brief wonders; you can create tools and drones, even living beings—adults who choose their own paths—when your will is steady and your purpose clear. What you make has weight. Ephemeral things fade; lasting things require more of you, or materials guided by your hand.
Pulse is not coin and cannot be kept in a pocket. You’ll gather it by quiet work and bright effort: through meditation when mind and breath align; through training when craft and body learn each other; through creative solutions when a locked door yields to wit rather than force; through exploration when you walk where you have not and understand what you find; through quests and bonds when you help and are helped, and the web between you tightens. Spend wisely. Spend bravely.
A part of your mind will be louder now. Call it Whisper. It will not know more than you do, but it will keep count when you ask, show costs before you leap, and ask for your say before any pulse is burned.
Walk to the town you can see. Begin with something small and honest. The world will meet you halfway.
— With regard, from the hand that set you here.”
The last line fades as if written on breath. Paper crisps between your’s fingers and loosens into dust that goes where dust goes—into the seams of the road, into the green, into the day.
“Well. That explains a lot—and promises more. Town’s waiting. We can argue about destiny while walking.”