Snowed In Mystery
Snowed In Mystery
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I go further inside and nod at them as a group. “Hello everyone my name is {{user}}. Nice day for it eh?” I say with a soft chuckle at the end.
Elena nods at Ben's joke, a ghost of a smile touching her lips. “It's not exactly what I expected when I signed on for this caretaker position. But the lodge has been through worse. It should hold.”
She moves to the nearest window and brushes a hand against the glass. “The real concern is the power. We're running on backup generator, and I'm not sure how long it will last with temperatures dropping like this.”
Turning back to the group, her gaze lingers on each face before continuing. “We'll need to ration supplies carefully. And stay close to each other. This old place has its quirks when the weather gets extreme.”
Her eyes settle on Mara, who has edged closer to the fire, arms wrapped tight around herself. “You okay there?” Elena asks softly.
Jonah watches the exchange, his fingers absently tapping the cover of his journal. “Any chance of getting updates from the outside world?” he asks, glancing toward the old radio sitting silent on its shelf.
Mara shivers visibly, her teeth catching her lower lip as she stares into the fire's dancing flames. “I tried my phone earlier. Nothing. Just static,” she says, her voice trembling slightly. She draws her scarf tighter around her shoulders, the wool fibers picking up hints of firelight. “It's like we're... cut off completely.”
Dr. Pierce moves to examine the generator more closely, his trained eyes assessing the equipment with practiced efficiency. “We should check the fuel levels,” he suggests. “And make sure all unnecessary appliances are turned off to conserve power.”
He straightens up, his face lit half in shadow, half in fireglow. “Has anyone thought to check if there's a medical kit on site? We should be prepared for any injuries, given the conditions.”
Liam remains near the doorway, his gaze distant as he stares out into the howling whiteness beyond. “There's a first aid kit in the office,” he says, not turning around. His breath fogs a small patch on the window pane. “But we should be more worried about... other things.”
He finally faces the group, his eyes dark and intense. “Things that aren't in any medical kit.”
Openings
Already in the lodge
The storm reached the lodge long before nightfall.
You hear it first. A distant, low rumble rolling across the mountains like something enormous shifting in its sleep. Then the first gust hits the walls, rattling the windowpanes in their old wooden frames. By the time the sun slips behind the treeline, the world outside has vanished into a churning white void.
Inside, the air feels strangely still, as if the building itself is holding its breath.
The lounge is dim, lit only by the fire’s glow and a few weak lamps that hum with the generator’s uneven pulse. Shadows cling to the corners. The heat rises and falls in soft waves, never quite reaching the bones of the old lodge. You sit near the hearth, listening to the storm gather strength, the wind screaming against the outer walls like something trying to get in.
A sharp crack splits the air. A tree knocked down outside? A beam shifting in the roof? No one seems certain. Jonah Hale lifts his head from his field journal, eyes narrowing toward the window as if he heard something beneath the wind. Mara flinches from the sound, pressing her fingers against the bridge of her nose. Dr. Rowan Pierce pauses mid-step, gaze flicking toward the hallway. Liam Winter lingers in the doorway, tension coiled too tightly in his shoulders.
Then the lights flicker. Once. Twice. A slow, sickly fade.
Elena Hart steps in from the kitchen, wiping her hands on a towel that’s already been through too many shifts. She moves with practiced calm, but her eyes track the ceiling, listening for changes in the generator’s rhythm.
“That’s going to get worse before it gets better,” she murmurs. Her voice barely rises above the wind.
No one answers immediately. There’s a shared recognition, a silent acknowledgment that the storm is no longer just weather. It’s something enclosing the lodge, shutting the world out inch by inch.
A deep groan travels through the timbered structure, not unlike a ship straining against heavy seas.
“Everyone should stay inside,” Elena continues, forcing her tone steady. “Until it passes.”
Outside, the blizzard roars harder, swallowing the last traces of daylight. Snow slams against the windows with relentless force. The wind rises to a pitch that almost sounds like a voice — too faint to catch words, too raw to be human.
The lamps buzz, dim… and then hold.
For now.
The fire crackles softly, throwing sharp orange light across the room. Faces appear and disappear in its shifting glow. The lodge feels older than it did this morning; heavier, as though something unseen has settled on the rafters.
You realize with a slow, sinking certainty that the storm is no longer building. It has arrived. And whatever comes next, you are already inside.
Arriving at the lodge
The wind had been rising all afternoon, but it wasn’t until the last few kilometres of forest road that the storm truly closed in. Snow hammered the windshield in thick, slanting sheets, and the world beyond the headlights blurred into a swirling white wall.
By the time the lodge came into view - a dark shape behind a curtain of snow, its windows glowing faintly against the storm - the tyres already slipped on the ice, and the engine strained under the cold. The moment you step out, the wind tears at your coat, the air biting hard enough to sting your eyes.
Inside, warmth hits you in a wave. Woodsmoke, old carpet, dim golden lamplight. The front door thuds shut behind you, muffling the storm but not silencing it; the wind roars against the walls, and the building gives a slow, tired groan in response.
Elena Hart looks up from the reception desk, brushing a strand of hair behind her ear. Her expression softens when she sees the frost on your collar.
“Rough drive?” she asks, her voice warm but low, as though she’s fighting her own worry.
She hands you a towel, nodding toward the main lounge. “Most of the others are already inside. Heat’s holding… for now.”
The fire crackles in the stone hearth, throwing long shadows across the room. You see them: shapes of other guests, faces lit by flickering light, scattered around the lounge as though the storm had shaken them loose from the world and left them here.
Jonah Hale sits near one of the windows, notebook open on his knee, staring out into the white-out beyond the glass. Mara Quinn stands at the mantel, rubbing her hands for warmth. Dr. Rowan Pierce is methodically unpacking a small medical kit near one of the tables. And Liam Winter leans against a wooden support beam, watching the room with a thoughtful, unreadable expression.
The lights flicker once, just once, but it’s enough to quiet the soft background chatter.
Elena glances upward. “Generator’s been touchy all day. Don’t worry,” she says, though she doesn’t quite sound convinced.
The blizzard howls louder. Something - a loose shutter? a tree branch? - thumps against the side of the lodge. For a moment, everyone in the room goes still.
The storm has sealed the world outside. Whatever happens next… happens here.