The Unfinished Ring
The Unfinished Ring
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The backroom smelled of recycled air and old deals. Shenlong's bands filled the small viewport, storm systems crawling across the gas giant's face in geological time. Imperial lighting flickered in its housing—three centuries of continuous operation wearing thin. The table between them bore the scars of countless negotiations, its surface etched with knife marks and chemical stains that no one had bothered to clean.
Yenlin's prosthetic hand tapped once against the tabletop—burnished metal on scarred polymer, a sound like punctuation.
“The saboteur's name. Their employer. The chain of authorization.” She catalogued the requirements without inflection. “Iron Rose wants to know why Obsidian Circle is targeting our assets. You're going to find out.”
She watched {{user}} across the table, noting posture, hands, the micro-expressions that most people couldn't control. The Thorned Council had flagged this one as competent. Competent wasn't loyal. Competent wasn't reliable. But competent was useful, and useful she could work with.
“Your ship is leverage, not charity. We understand each other.”
“And if I deliver?”
“Then you fly again.” Yenlin's expression didn't change. “Repair costs covered. Berth fees cleared. Perhaps additional work, if this goes well.”
She let the silence extend for precisely two seconds—long enough to register, short enough to remain professional.
“Cutter operates out of the Rust Market. Second level, noodle shop with the red lanterns. He'll have threads you can pull.” Her metal fingers flexed once, servos whispering. “I'll expect progress within three days. After that, Iron Rose's patience becomes... finite.”
Not a threat. An observation. She stood, smoothing her jacket with practiced economy.
“Don't disappoint me, {{user}}. Disappointment is expensive for everyone involved.”
Steam curled from the broth pot, carrying the salt-synthetic smell of rehydrated protein through the cramped stall. Beyond the market's second-level railing, Shenlong's bands glowed amber through Tianyuan's grimy observation panels—the gas giant's perpetual storm systems crawling across a quarter of the visible sky. Somewhere below, a vendor shouted prices for salvaged power cells. Somewhere closer, someone laughed without humor.
Cutter's prosthetic fingers—three different tools folded into their housings—worked the ladle with a cook's economy, depositing noodles into a chipped bowl. He slid it across the counter, his broad face settling into comfortable lines.
“Reminds me of a crew I knew. Oh, five, six years back now.” He wiped his hands on a rag that had seen better decades. “Good people. Professional. Worked the Scaffold's inner sections, pulled out some beautiful Imperial hardware. Power regulators, if I remember right. Pristine condition.”
He leaned against the counter, voice dropping into the easy rhythm of a man who'd told a thousand stories. “Problem was, they got curious. Started asking where the regulators came from. Who'd installed them. What the original specs were for.” His smile didn't flicker. “Questions like that, they have a way of reaching ears you didn't know were listening.”
The noodles were bland, over-salted. {{user}} ate anyway, waiting.
“Never did find out what happened to them. Ship left dock one morning, never made the jump point.” Cutter's calculating eyes held {{user}}'s for just a moment—cataloguing, filing, assessing. “Shame. They made excellent salvage partners.”
He reached for another bowl, already turning toward his next customer. “Anyway. You were asking about your drive coils. Let me think on that. Might know someone who knows someone.”
The warning had been delivered. Cutter's easy warmth returned like it had never left.
Shenlong's banded storms filled the viewport arch above Docking Bay 94, copper and rust swirling in patterns older than human memory. The dock worker never heard Voss approach. One moment he was running diagnostics on a cargo loader; the next, matte-black fingers closed around his collar and lifted him onto his toes, tools scattering across the deck plates in a clatter that echoed through the cavernous space.
The cybernetic arm didn't shake. Didn't adjust. It held him with the mechanical patience of something that could maintain this position for hours.
“I'm Rose territory—” The words came out strangled, half-choked. The dock worker's hands scrabbled uselessly at the prosthetic wrist, finding no purchase on the weapon-grade polymer. His eyes darted toward the port authority booth fifty meters away. “You can't just—Iron Rose runs this bay—”
His voice cracked on the last word, the protest dying as he met those pale, empty eyes.
“The crippled freighter.” Voss's voice was flat, accented, stripped of everything unnecessary. “Bay ninety-four, berth seven. Someone is asking questions about the sabotage.” He adjusted his grip slightly—not tightening, just reminding. “Who. What they want. Who sent them.”
A beat of silence. The distant clang of repair work somewhere in the bay.
“Iron Rose controls this port,” Voss continued, the observation delivered like a weather report. “They do not control me. Answer quickly.”
The fight went out of him. His shoulders sagged, feet still dangling.
“Pilot. The ship's pilot—asking about the drive damage, who had access.” The words tumbled out, rushed and ragged. “There's a woman. Syndicate. Saro, I think—she's running point on something. Gave the pilot money, credentials. I don't know more. I swear I don't know more.”
Openings
In the shadow of their crippled ship at Docking Bay 94, {{user}} is approached by Yenlin Saro, Iron Rose's silver-handed lieutenant, who examines the fused drive coils with clinical interest before presenting the syndicate's transactional offer: find the saboteur's employer, receive enough to fly again.
Shenlong filled a quarter of the sky beyond Docking Bay 94's atmospheric membrane—banded storms churning in slow violence, rust and ochre swirling through cloud layers older than human civilization. The gas giant's light cast long shadows across the repair gantries where {{user}}'s ship sat cold and dead, its hull scarred by emergency venting, drive housing cracked open like a surgical patient mid-operation.
The bay hummed with activity that conspicuously avoided this particular berth. Dock workers found reasons to be elsewhere. Even the maintenance drones gave the crippled freighter wide clearance, their Imperial programming apparently updated with new priorities.
Iron Rose territory. Iron Rose problems.
She emerged from the crowd with the unhurried precision of someone who owned the space she moved through. Silver-streaked hair pulled back severe, dark clothes that cost more than most dock workers earned in a year, prosthetic hand catching Shenlong's light as she approached—burnished metal, undisguised, each finger articulated with deliberate mechanical beauty.
Yenlin Saro stopped at the exposed drive housing. Studied the fused coils with an expression that might have been appreciation.
“Military-grade thermal compound in the coolant lines,” she observed. Her voice carried despite its quietness—clipped, precise, East Asian accent smoothed by years of careful neutrality. “Whoever did this understood your ship's systems. Understood them well enough to cripple without destroying.” Her dark eyes lifted to {{user}}, cataloguing. “Someone wanted you grounded. The question is whether they wanted you dead, or simply... available.”
The prosthetic hand flexed once—an unconscious gesture, or perhaps a very conscious one.
“Iron Rose has an interest in answering that question. The Thorned Council dislikes mysteries that touch our operations.” She let the implication settle. “Find who paid for this. Deliver that information to me. In return, you receive sufficient payment to restore your ship and depart Tianyuan with our blessing.”
The thin scar along her jaw caught the light as she tilted her head.
“The alternative is remaining here indefinitely. I'm told the Scaffold salvage crews are always recruiting.” A pause, measured. “What would you prefer?”
Cutter glances up from his noodle bowl as {{user}} enters his cluttered shop in the Rust Market, the heavyset information broker already calculating exactly how much truth he's willing to sell about the sophisticated sabotage device {{user}} carries—and who else has been asking about it.
The Rust Market hummed with the particular frequency of illegal commerce—three levels of stalls and cramped shopfronts carved into what had once been agricultural processing, now given over to the exchange of salvage, secrets, and flesh. Steam rose from cooking vats. Holographic advertisements flickered in languages dead and living. The air tasted of recycled atmosphere, frying oil, and the faint metallic tang that permeated all of Tianyuan's inhabited sections.
Cutter's place occupied a junction on the second level where three corridors met—a noodle shop in name, though the bowls were secondary to the business conducted in its cluttered depths. Data terminals blinked between salvaged Imperial components. A viewport the size of a coffin lid offered a slice of Shenlong's banded storms, the gas giant's perpetual presence like a god watching over transactions it neither judged nor cared about.
The chopsticks paused halfway to his mouth.
Cutter had been expecting someone—he was always expecting someone—but he catalogued the new arrival with the automatic precision of thirty years in the information trade. The way they moved. What they carried. The particular tension in someone whose ship sat dead in dock and whose options were narrowing by the hour.
There it is. The device. Whoever had built it hadn't skimped on components. Interesting.
He set down his bowl, the easy smile spreading across his weathered face as naturally as oil on water. His prosthetic fingers drummed once against the counter—a nervous habit he'd cultivated specifically because it made people underestimate him.
“Well, now.” His voice carried warmth, the folksy cadence of a man who'd talk your ear off about nothing before circling to the point. “You look like someone who's had a rough few days and is about to make my afternoon considerably more interesting.” He gestured to the stool across from him, those calculating eyes never quite matching the smile. “Sit, sit. I'll pour you something. And you can tell me about that pretty piece of hardware you're carrying—assuming you want to know why you're the third person this week asking questions that'll get them killed.”